Tuesday 31 January 2017

It's none of their business that you have to learn to write.

Let them think you were born that way.

Ernest Hemingway

Wednesday 18 January 2017

Mary's wedding ring, given to Benjamin by her father because it used to belong to her mother.
The inside of beautiful St. Merryn church.

Sunday 8 January 2017

Best book I've read in a while, and it's by an indie author.

Miro by A.E.Nasr



This book is that rare combination of a riveting, compelling, detailed story that is also exquisitely written. I would give it 6 stars if I could because it should be in that category of outstanding. The best book I have read in a long while. The book centres on the lives of 5 very different men. Incarcerated just for resisting they spend 9 years in harrowing conditions but somehow never give up hope of freedom. When the unexpected happens and they do break free they have a journey as fugatives in the occupied country that was once their home. This book lays bare just how low human nature can sink, just how depraved, callous and cruel it can be. But against that the 5 men have formed a unique bond of friendship and love and they demonstrate that despite everything the human spirit never gives up hope. The writing is magnificent and therefore the scenes of extreme brutality and tension had me in tears but the book is spinkled throughout with humour, love and hope, to counter this. This book should be read by a great many people, not just because it deserves to be but also because it is a thought provoking and distrubingly realistic account of life in a war torn, occupied country and the savage, heartless effect that has on the lives of decent human beings.

Friday 6 January 2017

Point Of View

Point Of View

I've just finished reading some very good indie author books. Something I did notice in each book though is that the POV tended to vary between mostly the author's and sometimes a character's, but it fluctuated randomly. I don't think I would have even noticed this before I started writing and I loved each book anyway so I'm wondering. Would those books have been enhanced if I'd had more of the characters POV instead of the authors? Or would the magic of each book have been somehow lost. What POV do you use and how do you decide what's best?